You’re on BASE! Take some time to catch your breath … you are safe.

I own my PSP It is the best thing to me I play it when I’m asleep and I play it when I walk home and that the end of something  I own.  score 11

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My shoes are importment to me because they portect my feet. Because they make me feel safe. They make me look good. Because some people run over my feet. And so no body won’t see my bad feet    score 12

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Something that special to me is my xbox because I like the colors and you get to make your own avatar dress it up and everything   

score  13

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When ever I first got my gamboy. It was one cristmas Day I was happy I got out of my bed and woke every Body up. We all went in the living room we opened up all of our prizes then I opened up this one and it was an gameboy I was so proud then I lost it.   score 13

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Football is impronut. Football is fun. Footballs is and oval. It got white lines on it. Football is a sport.

score13

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Comments on: "So glad I have a rubric … part three" (3)

  1. Wow.
    My heart breaks a little for these kiddos.
    Goodness~

    I KNOW. IT IS AMUSING TO SEE THE THINGS THEY COME UP WITH, BUT THE REALITY ISN’T AMUSING AT ALL. I AM JUST AMAZED AT THE LACK OF PUNCTUATION. WHAT DOES IT SAY WHEN YOU DON’T THINK TO PUT THAT … ISN’T THAT ONE OF THE FIRST THINGS WE LEARN?

  2. Oh wow!!! I just don’t even know what to say!

    THE HIGHEST SCORING ONES ARE COMING UP …

  3. I agree with the shoes portecting the feet. That’s pretty much how I feel, too.

    I’m also glad you have a rubric (I just learned that word when I started college, btw), because wow, how would you possibly grade these otherwise?

    RUBRICS SAVE MY LIFE IN SO MANY WAYS. IT HELPS ME NOT BE SUBJECTIVE. WHEN GRADING SPECIAL EDUCATION WORK YOU REALLY HAVE TO HAVE SPECIFIC ELEMENTS YOU’RE LOOKING FOR. THE OVERALL PICTURE USUALLY LOOKS PRETTY GRAVE.

    SHOES ARE ONE OF THE BEST INVENTIONS EVER. THEY ARE SURELY ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT THINGS THAT I OWN.

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