You’re on BASE! Take some time to catch your breath … you are safe.

Here’s a reminder of our prompt.

Prompt: Think about an item or object (for example, your sneakers, an old sweatshirt, an MP3 player) you own that is so special to you that you cannot do without it. (Do not choose a person or a pet). Write a paragraph for your classmates in which you describe that object and give reasons why it is important to you.

The thing that important to me is my love life. The reason why its important to me is because life is short the world is small. Hope is upon the line. Love is not so far. Faith is a live when you touch my heart.  (I’m pretty sure these are song lyrics) Score:  9

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I own a playstation three. I like playstation three my dad bought me one so I own it I have lots of games to play I think that’s what I own.   Score: 9

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My speecal ibject is my mp3. Becau I like to lesston to music. It let me contestate. I get relaxes. Get me in my happy place. Score: 10

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Comments on: "So glad I have a rubric … part two" (1)

  1. Contestant #3 gets a 10????? Really? Is your rubric based upon a language another planet perhaps? <>

    THEY GET MORE POINTS IF THEY STAY ON TOPIC … ADDRESS THE PROMPT … AND USE CREATIVE WORD CHOICE. GRAMMAR AND SPELLING ARE ROLLED INTO ONE SCORE SO THEY REALLY DON’T MATTER MUCH. WHAT I FIND IS THAT THE SHORTER ONES STAY ON TOPIC BETTER … AND USUALLY USE MORE INTERESTING WORDS.

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